This is my response to this week's Poetry Potluck, which I discovered thanks to a link over at Porky's Expanse!. The theme for the week is Evolution, Environment, and Survival.
I feel like I am channeling Ogden Nash this week...
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The pattern set, the dance arises,
called by DNA surprises;
radiation fiddles, clearly,
often costing dancers dearly;
on the other hand, it rarely
benefits them, Punnett-squarely.
New mutations change the rules,
by broadening or ending pools,
and new conditions reshape life,
like a random pocket knife
that whittles out forms, plain or odd,
mimicking the hand of God.
Wonderful take on the theme and the letter of the day! love the rhyme :)
ReplyDeleteThat's cute and clever! The second stanza is particularly good.
ReplyDeleteCame here from Poetry potluck, a very enjoyable visit!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/11/evolution-in-a-nutshell/
nice! mines here~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/natures-gravity/
ReplyDeletesmart take on I.
ReplyDeleteyou rock.
welcome to JP.
A++
Love your inspiration!
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Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteAwards for you, thanks for the support!
ReplyDeleteShare a free verse today,
Bless your talent.
Xxx
4 hours before closing come on in, comment later.
welcome join us again.
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super busy these 3 days.
smiles.
@Jingle - Done! This week's poem is here.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the invitation, and the link.