Thursday, April 7, 2011

Flash Fearsday: Unfathomable

Water rippling, silver and black.
What does it conceal?
Moon beams cannot interrogate from above.
Sightless eyes stare back -
Dead silence.



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This is my response to the April 7th, 2011 Flash Fearsday exercise over at Lunching on Lamias, which challenges you to write a horror story in exactly 140 characters. It is also my "F" entry for the A-Z Blogging Challenge.

3 comments:

  1. What does that last line conceal..? Icy. There's a cool rhythm too coming partly from that rhyme.

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  2. I love your site and as I browsed your blog I decided to award you the Creative Blog Award.
    Go to http://astorybookworld.blogspot.com/p/awards.html and pick up your award.
    ~Deirdra

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  3. I just found you through the A-Z challenge . . . I'm enjoying your posts!

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