Sunday, August 28, 2011

Flash Fearsday: Eye of the Storm

The voice of the storm howls out a warning.
Its arms sweep out a path of destruction.
But the eye, the eye is calm and silent.

This is my response to the August 25th, 2011 Flash Fearsday challenge over at Lunching on Lamias.

1 comment:

  1. Good thinking, for horror for sure, and really a logical next step after we name a storm and start to assign a personality - what might the storm want, or what might want to use it? It plays up the eeriness in the choice of the term 'eye' too, and the associations in 'calm', a measured intelligence. And the repetition is clever, for the extra drama, a sense of a revelation.